Fangala the Flying Feline

Ew, I hate rap! No, this is a song. When I sing it with its melody, it does sound musical, it's just sort of wordy. But what can I say? ...

Haha, I loved this! Personally, I thought the previous reviewers were too harsh on you. Not everything has to be metaphorical. I mean, sometimes us writers want to let loose ...

Wow, nice. I like the flow of this, but it gets repetitive near the end. You could easily shorten this by cutting out wordiness and replacing it with striking similes, ...

Bravo. I liked this. Your first few paragraphs are gripping, both with style and content. (I love short paragraphs :D) However, I agree with Squallz that your protagonist is bland ...

Whoa, I haven't checked this topic in forever! Sorry, guys. I'll get right on those reviews.

Hiya. Well, I really liked this! However, I must INSIST you change the title. I'm sorry, but there are about a billion stories named The Elements. (I, for one, wrote ...

Ooh, quite nice. Carry-on crows...that's pretty genius. Overall, I thought this was really good. Carry, carry, carry-on Crows perching upon a branch. The flock's all here perform your leer and ...

Thanks for that! I accidentally posted two of these and I couldn't figure out how to delete the other one. :D

Chapter Seven: The Goblin Hordes The soul had directed me to Gobling Towers, home of the goblins. There, they would give me directions to the Land of the Living Dead, ...

Thanks, Seraph. I was wincing as I posted this, seriously. I'm aware that it moves way too fast, but like I said, this will undergo a brutal rewrite. Thanks for ...

Wow! I really liked this. You've certainly got a vivid imagination and a knack for expressing it. I could totally see everything that was happening. I normally don't read screenplays ...

Hiya, Seraph! This is cool; it's not like anything you've written before. So you're trying out the letter idea, huh? An interesting concept, but, unfortunately, it's been overdone. This particular ...

Hey, everybody! I decided to finally post something here, just to see what people say. I'll be raising several controversial topics, such as how the movie Ella Enchanted is SO ...

Ooh, bravo! This is quite nice. :D In fact, there's really nothing wrong with it. This is an intriguing world you've set up--sort of science-fictiony, like it takes place in ...

Hello, people. Sorry about the huge gap between this post and the last one. I wonder if anyone's even reading this anymore. Anyway, there's only a few chapters left, so ...